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Post by Inuzuka Delliah on Nov 9, 2007 6:40:16 GMT -5
This is story that I've been working on called, Torn Wings{A Yugioh GX Story}! It's a story about a young girl named Kisara, who ends up going to Duel Academy, but oddly enough she's not a normal girl, and has some odd qualities to her.. What will happen to her and what kind of adventures will she have here? Well, read to find out!
Kisara's Profile
Name: Kisara(Kisa) Dragonbane Age: 16 Looks; (Picture will be added soon) Long blonde hair and chocolate brown eyesare the essentials on this teen. Her clothes ca often be anything from gothic to casual. She won't wear pink. Two cute small black wings are upon her back, which are real by the way. Even her nails are alot sharper than most humans, and she has fangs. She has a silver necklace with a black dragon with red eyes on it along her neck. She has matching bracelets and anklets, but they don't have charms and have a whitish,black,silver, and red orb on them each.
Extra Info: Kisa comes from a very weird family. More like demons really. Her family is full of demons. Her father is the Grim Reaper and her mother is a dragon demon. Her mother is dead due to hunters, though her father tried everything in his power to stop it. Kisa wanted to be normal, so her father had moved up to earth do his job easier. Her father looks normal using a spell that seems like he's human. Kisa got interested in dueling so her father sent her off there, but gave her a pocket knife that expands into a black sythe, with a red aura around it. The handle is silver with a white dragon carved into it. This was just to show others that she was nothing to mess with in a fight.
Deck: Her deck is a Dragon/Demon Deck.
Chapter 1, will be up soon! So after the first chapter feel free to comment, but don't bash it to hard okay?
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Post by Inuzuka Delliah on Nov 9, 2007 6:42:11 GMT -5
Chapter 1: The Boys Meet Kisara
Kisa closed her brown eyes slowly and sighed opening them again," This view is great, regardless of being the lowest dorm rank ." She folded her arms on the railing and looked out. Her nails softly clicked upon the wood and she looked towards her dorm room. She had come in a few hours ago and got all settled in. She had her small cute black dragon wings out, figuring people would think they were fake. Males passed by her on the balcony and stared at her. It was offily weird to see a girl in Slifer Red since there were none and now there was a female in their dorm.
"Hey girly. My what a cutie you are.." Kisa turned around to see a muscular male with green-like hair. Something about him, she just didn't like. Usually she would have been kind,but felt this fellow she didn't feel right.
Kisa smirked," Of course, I am. Though I'm a piece of work you'll never get..."
His expression changed," Oh really? and why would that be?" She pulled her pocked knife out of her pocket and flicked the blade open.
"Because you don't know what I'm capable of. Your hitting on me yet you have no idea who I am.. What a shame.." Kisa chuckled quietly, the pocket knife transformed into a long sythe. She smirked as he stepped back looking at her oddly," This is where you run,human." She aimed her sythe at him and he only laughed.
"Some magic trick, you pulled there."The boy laughed.
"It's not a magic trick.." She said. She shot flames towards his feet and he jumped. He looked at her freaked out.
"OMG! YOUR A FREAK!"
"Aww, I was cute earlier. You still want me?" She grinned. He took off running. Her sythe turned back into a pocket knife," That took care of him..." She walked back into her dorm shutting the door. She stayed in her dorm for a few minutes until a bell sounded which she was told that it signified,dinner time. She jumped up off her bed and walked out of her dorm. A group of boys headed towards her way, it seemed about 4 boys. She walked down the stairs and down towards the dining hall. She felt someone brush past her and basically pushed her on purpose. She looked ahead to see aboy with black spiky hair and a black uniform. Her eyes narrowed. She snorted, smoke dribbled out of her nose which no one noticed. Her hand reached out and grabbed his collar," Who the hell do you think you are? Don't fuckin' push me again, or your gonna be toast." She let him off with a simple warning as she started to walk away.
"Whatever." The boy said and finally took a look at her asshe got her food and sat down at a table by herself. She looked to her food, the fish seemed raw and seemed like it would come alive. She covered her mouth so where no one could see, she blew fire onto it to heat it up. She began to eat when she heard a cough behind her. She turned her head to see the group of boys along with that one guy who had puished her from earlier.
"Hey, can we sit with you? Okay don't mind if I do.." The brunette said and sat down by her.
"Jaden! That's rude, can we sit with you? I'm sorry about Chazz earlier, his ego's bigger than his head." A ra yellow with aqua blue spiky hair said to her.
Kisa couldn't help but chuckle," Sure, you can. It's fine." The boys all sat down.
"Name's Tyranno Hassleberry." Another boy in a ra yellow uniform said extending his hand towards Kisa. She gently shook his hand.
"Kisara Dragonbane, you guys can just call me Kisa though." She smiled softly. The other introduced themselves as Jaden Yuki, Syrus Truesdale, and Chazz Princeton," It's a pleasure to meet you all." She gently ate her food.
"So.. what kind of deck do you run?" Jaden asked.
Kisara smiled," Well, I run a Dragon/Demon deck. I guess you can say the deck reminds me of my parents.." The boys looked at her oddly.
"Are.. your..parents mean or something?" The little Truesdale asked curiously. Kisara laughed and ruffled his hair with her hand.
"No, nothing like that. My mother's been dead for a few months now. She got killed, and my dad.. I guess you can say my dad a demon himself sometimes, that old man.." She chuckled to herself. They looked at her sadly when she mentioned her mom. She knew that look," I'm okay about my mother dying. I was even lucky to have her as long as I did. So please, don't feel sorry for me." She finished eating and leaned back on her chair.
"Oh okay,Kisa." Syrus nodded his head and looked towards Kisa. She was a pretty girl, but she probably had a boyfriend, werein his thoughts.
"So Kisa? Do you have a boyfriend?" Chazz asked. He found her quite hot.
Kisa blinked and busted out laughing," Me? Have a guy? Of course not. I may have some good looks to me, but their's no way I could handle a boy. If there anything here like where I come from, they have one thing on their mind.. and that's mating. Your terms sex." She fiddled with her fingers as the boys seemed to blush when she mentioned that. She looked at them all," See? You guys are blushing, so see I'm right!" She grinned with pride.
"Well, not all boys are like that..." Syrus stuttered. Kisa raised an eyebrow at him.
"Really? Someone really needs to point themselves out, than cause so far in my life there are none, they don't ask for that kind of thing from me." Kisara said huffing, her arms were crossed.
Chazz chuckled," Those two idiots right there. Especially Syrus." He pointed at Jaden and Syrus. Kisa smiled. She stood up.
"Well, I've got to head back to my dorm. So I'll talk to you guys tommorow? Unless you guys want to come with me?" She winked playfully and giggled, she was just being playful.
"Nah, I've got to stick by Jaden. Hey pipsqueak, why don't you walk her to her dorm room?" Tyranno said grinning.
Syrus blushed," I mean if she wants me too.." Kisa pulled him up, grabbing his hand.
"Sure, Syrus. C'mon." She said as waved back to them all," See ya guys!" The other boys watched Syrus and Kisa walk away.
End of Chapter 1, Chapter 2 will be up shortly! Feel free to comment! ;D
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Post by Naruto Uzumaki on Nov 9, 2007 6:42:35 GMT -5
woah i cant wait till the next one
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Post by Inuzuka Delliah on Nov 9, 2007 6:52:59 GMT -5
Chapter 2: The Beginning of a CrushKisa and Syrus contunied walking, of course Kisa didn't notice her holding his hand. Syrus was blushing," So Syrus? Your a ra yellow right? So what are ya doing in the slifer dorm?" "Well, my friend Jaden is a slifer, so I stayed around here because of him." Syrus replied, he hoped that she would keep talking so he wouldn't think about how soft her hand was. His thoughts kept drifting to her, and it scared him just a bit, but this didn't show on his face. "Oh, that's awfully nice of you. Your such a nice guy, so far that I've seen of you anyways.." She smiled, complimenting him. "Thanks, my mom says I'm a pretty good person." He said beaming a little. Kisa chuckled. "Mhm, and she's quite right about that. My dad always told me I was a pretty good person as well, though it's weird.. I yearn to be like everyone else. Yet my dad says, that living a lie wastes your time on earth. I just wanna find myself you know?" She looked up as the sun started to set," I just feel like something's missing in my life, but I can't figure out just what.. Sounds stupid huh?" She anime sweat dropped and rubbed the back of her head with her other hand. Syrus shook his head no," It doesn't sound stupid at all. I understand, and I kinda feel the same way you do." He blushed slightly. Kisa smiled as they walked upstairs to her dorm. "Well, here it is. Thanks for walking me up here,Sy. Is it okay that I call you that,Syrus?" She asked. He nodded," It's okay. Everyone does. I'll just go now.." He was about to walk away when she grabbed his hand again. He looked back at her. "I can't let you go un-rewarded, can I?" She gently kissed his cheek," Your just so nice,Sy." His heart pounded in his chest, and seemed to echo in his ears. He blushed heavily, wondering if she heard it. He felt weak in the knees and smiled at her back. She looked at him intently,and smiled back at him again," Well, I'll see you tommorow." She caught him off guard and kissed his cheek again. She walked back into her dorm and shut the door. Syrus gulped and blushed," Did she really kiss my cheek?" He felt his cheek and looked at her closed door with a goofy smile on his face," She did!" He felt like he was floating on a cloud as he walked back to his dorm. He opened the door to meet the faces of his friends. "Gee, Sy. You look happy, did something happen?" Jaden asked as he looked at his best friend intently. "Nothing,Jaden. We just, umm.. talked. I'm gonna head off to bed.." He yawned and stretched. He got onto his bed and crawled in. Chazz said," Truesdale, your not getting out of it that.." Before could finish Syrus seemed to be asleep with a sly smile on his face. Chazz anime sweatdropped as he finished,"easy.." "Chill,Chazz. I bet they just dueled or something. I mean Kisa seems really cool." Jaden said as he looked through his own deck. "Yeah,right." Chazz huffed, something had to be up with Syrus to make him act like that. Tyranno had already fallen asleep due to lack of sleep the night before. "So it's just you and me,Chazz.." Jaden said," Let's go for another all nighter!" Chazz went wide eyed and got into his bed and pretended to sleep," Chazz.. CHAZZ! Guys,c'mon. Aww man.." Sighing in defeat, the airheaded boy of the group shut off the light and went to sleep as well. Sorry that this chapter was shorter, but the next chapter will be longer.. I promise! Oh and thanks Naruto for commenting.
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Post by Inuzuka Delliah on Nov 9, 2007 7:00:55 GMT -5
[Warning! This chapter gets a little bit dirty so bare with me. It's not to bad, but if you don't like that stuff, it's at the end of the chapter last paragraph so feel free to skip it]
Chapter 3: Discovering Secrets and Hearts
A 3 weeks had passed. Kisa had been introduced to Alexis, Bastion, Atticus many others. Syrus had been contemplating his feelings about Kisa. Today was the day he was going to tell her how he felt about her. Though the young boy said this many times and it failed."It'll be today, I'm so sure of it!" Syrus said to himself. He looked around for Kisa and saw Alexis. He approached her," Have you seen Kisa around,Alexis?"
Alexis turned her head and pointed towards the forest," She went that way about 15 minutes ago, if you hurry you can catch up to her." She smiled. Syrus took off running towards the forest. He stopped and walked along a path. He looked towards a clearing and blinked thinking he saw some kind of huge black monster. When suddenly a brown shape started approach him, it seemed to be a huge looking bear beast. Unlike any bear he's ever seen before. It's red eyes, and acid-like drool spewed from it's mouth and looked hungerly at Syrus. It charged at Syrus when a big black beast knocked it away snarling. Syrus reconized it as a dragon. The bear snarled back as the dragon blew fire at it. The bear yelped and ran.
"Don't come back now." The dragon said snorting out fire. Syrus reconized that voice, and looked frightened when the dragon turned to him with icy blue eyes. He looked upon it's neck to see a larger version of Kisara's necklace. The dragon seemed to be femine-like.
"Why... do...you...h..a...ve... .Ki..sa..'s.. neck..lace?" He stuttered alot towards the dragon.
"Syrus? Can I trust you with a secret?" She closed her eyes and a black aura went around the dragon. When it cleared there stood Kisa.
"Kisa? Your.. a.." Syrus couldn't say more.
Kisa put her head down," Syrus, go ahead and run away. Yes, I'm not human. You see, my mother was a dragoness and my father is the Grim Reaper. I've been trying to fit in, but sometimes I need to walk around in my dragon form.." Syrus saw a few tears hit the ground as she looked at him, her eyes red from crying," So what are you waiting for? Go ahead and say you hate me now..." She turned to walk away. Syrus looked at her and came up to her grabbing her arm.
"Kisa.. it doesn't matter that your not like everybody else. Your beautiful, no matter what.. This doesn't change my opinion of you at all.. In fact I even love you.." Syrus blushed at how easily the words seemed to flow out as he comforted her.
Kisa gasped and looked at him," You.. love me?" He nodded and she hugged him and cried tears of joy,"Sy, I love you too.." She held him close to her," I promise you, that I'll never hurt you,Syrus." She cupped his chin with her hand," May I kiss you, Syrus?" He blinked and blushed. His reply was a nod. She leaned down a little and kissed him softly. She closed her eyes. He blinked in surprise and closed his eyes as well. The two were so caught up in the moment. They failed to notice, the rest of the gang had followed them had been there long enough to only see the kiss.
"Aww, isn't that sweet,Jaden? Syrus and Kisara look like such a cute couple." Alexis whispered.
"NOOO! Why does he get the hot girl? I wanted her!" Chazz whined. Alexis bopped him over the head and they watched. The couple had finally pulled back and stared at each other. Syrus's cheeks were both bright red. Kisara giggled and shook her head at him.
"Syrus? Your just so cute you know that?" She giggled again and stroked her hand through his hair softly. He smiled enjoying her touch.
"I guess so, but your.. umm. much more cuter than me.." He blushed again.
Kisa only smiled at that,she was waiting for him to ask her to be his girlfriend but figured he was to scared too," Hey Sy? Wanna be my boyfriend?" Everyone's jaws dropped.
Syrus blushed nodding," Okay,Kisa." Kisa grinned happily, her fangs slightly showing.
She picked him up bridal style," Alrighty than."
"Hey isn't the guy supposed to do that to the girl?" Syrus said, this was making him laugh.
"Well, yeah.. but I don't think you can pick me up.." She anime sweatdropped and laughed.
Syrus felt kind of playful," Oh really? Set me down than and we'll see.. " Kisa set him down and immeaditely he picked her up bridal style. She was surprised he could even do it.
She poked his stomach,"Do you go abs under there or something? Or is there muscle in your arms that no one knows about?" She giggled. He laughed and started walking.
"Hey stop that or I'll fall..." Kisa smirked when he said this and poked his stomach again and again. He dropped Kisa, and Kisa grabbed his shirt bringing him down on top of her. This made the couple blush, since this was not Kisara's intention.
"Um, Syrus? Can you get off?" Kisa said softly, blushing. Syrus blushed, though he noticed his body seemed to fit hers. It felt good to him, he wanted to experiment with her just to see what she would do. He gulped, since he was so nervous right about now. He slid his lower body away from hers and banged it back down. Kisa would have thought she would have smacked him for that, but being a dragoness, her feelings consumed her. A low moan escaped her lips," Syrus, stop. That's turning me on.." She whispered. Syrus for some odd reason wanted to contunie,so he contunied with this dry humping act. It was okay to them it seemed. Moans came from her mouth, as well as his. He got off of her quickly before they could go any further.
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Post by Broken Team on Nov 9, 2007 16:15:47 GMT -5
Cool...Your brilliant at fan-fic's..I didn't even realise my music had stopped!
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Post by Naruto Uzumaki on Nov 9, 2007 16:21:29 GMT -5
So awesome! It makes me want to start a yugioh gx rp!
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Post by Lord Blue Dragonal on Nov 9, 2007 16:31:56 GMT -5
Haha, nice works! This is great fan-fic story to read, keep it up!
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Post by Inuzuka Delliah on Nov 10, 2007 12:31:06 GMT -5
Chapter 4: A New Couple in the Gang
Alexis and everyone else watched this, and slipped away not wanting to see more," Those two... Well at least there playing it safe you guys.." They said as they headed down to the beach.
"Well, it's still pretty gross. She's turning Syrus into her horn dog.. I wanted to be that lucky bastard." Chazz complained. Alexis smacked him hard.
"There in love, you idiot! There's no room for you in the middle Chazz.. So don't screw it up!" Chazz crossed his arms.
"Yeah Chazz! Let the lovers be." Bastion said.
"Hey guys!" Syrus and Kisa said as they walked up hand in hand.
"Hey Kisa, Hey Sy. Ooh, are you two a couple?" Alexis said playing dumb.
Kisa nodded," Yeah, we sure are." She came up behind Syrus and wrapped her arms around him and laid her head on his shoulder smiling.
"Aww, you two are so cute." Alexis smiled. Both of them blushed and smiled at each other.
"Hey guys! You wanna go swimming?" Everyone seemed to look at Syrus as Kisa said that. Syrus anime sweatdropped," What is it? Is it something I said?"
Jaden said," Did you know that Syrus can't swim?" Kisa blinked and smiled.
"Well, he can hold onto me if he wants. Okay,Sy?" Kisa blushed a little as well as Syrus did.
< After changing into swim suits>
Everyone else had changed into their swimsuits. Kisa walked up behind Syrus who was in blue swim trunks. Kisa put her hands on his waist. He jumped and looked at her and blinked. She was in a black two-piece bikini that tied around her neck. Though her small cute wings were still out. She smiled," Last one to the water, has to kiss Chazz's butt!" Everyone took off running into the water. Even Syrus. Syrus grabbed ahold of Kisa's arm and held on tight. She laughed and smiled," Sy, you'll be okay.." Syrus seemed to smile more at that. Alexis splashed them both.
"I bet you two can't get me back!" Alexis said grinning.
"I bet we can,right Kisa?"
"Right!" Kisa grinned back and splashed Alexis heavily and so did Syrus.
"Hey guys.. STOP IT! You got me back already!" Alexis said laughing. Syrus and Kisara stopped and smiled at one another.
"Kisara..." A voice said.
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Post by Inuzuka Delliah on Nov 10, 2007 12:32:29 GMT -5
Chapter 5: Family Reunion
She looked around and so did everyone else. Suddenly a figure in a dark cloak came from the water. Everyone jumped back freaked out. Kisa only laughed.
"Dad, what on.. nevermind why are you here?" She questioned. Her friends turned her head to look at Kisa like she was weird.
A loud chuckle filled the air that," Kisara, my.. I just came to see how my little girl was doing. Even Death can take breaks.." He pulled down his hood down and what everyone else saw was a healthy looking male with black shaggy hair and red eyes. To Kisa she saw a skelaton with with black mist around his feet. He had a sythe in his hand, with a long blade. Everyone seemed to stare at the sythe. Kisa smiled and aproached her father and hugged him.
"Well, you might wanna put that sythe away,dad. Everyone this is my father, you can just call him Grim." Kisa said smiling. Syrus went wide eyed, meeting the grim reaper was quite weird to him.
"Nice to meet you,Grim." Everyone seemed to take turns saying.
"Woah, how can you appear out of the water like that?" Jaden asked as he approached and looked at his sythe intently. Grim chuckled and ruffled the boys hair with his bony hand. Though no one else could see it.
"It's simple. Just one of my many entrances. These are your friends,Kisara? Have you even informed them who I am or should I?" Her father asked.
"You should, dad. Everybody get back.." Kisa said pulling Jaden back away from her dad. Her father made flames surround him in the water and spin around him, the flames cracking like the sound of whips. He made his real self shown to her friends, as he made a barrier around them all.
"I am the Grim Reaper, the taker of life or simply known as Death." He said his sythe glowing a crimson red color. Everyone seemed to be freaked out by this but at the same time it seemed pretty cool to them.
"Oh so that explains, alot. Wait so does that not make Kisara normal either?" Alexis said.
Her father smirked," Kisara isn't normal, the daughter of the myself and the great dragoness demon Vetaliny. The powers of both a reaper and a dragon flow within my daughter's veins." Everyone stared at Kisa.
"What? Did I forget to mention that?" She giggled," but you guys know, you can't tell anyone." Grim approached Syrus, and simply walked around him inspecting him. Syrus blinked and gulped. The way her father looked scared him alot. He stayed still and didn't question any of this.
"Hmm, not the strongest human you could be with. A tad on the short side.." He put his hand on Syrus's head," but his will is strong, and the fear of me right now.." He chuckled," Quite funny, of course I'm not going to hurt you Syrus Truesdale. Hmmm, what's this I sense?" He closed his eyeless eyes and opened them again moving his hand back," Try not to be insecure about yourself, it could lead to your downfall." Syrus went wide eyed." I must go for now,Kisa. Chazz? Don't let lust consume you, especially if your after my flesh and blood. I might decide to take your life early." He took one look at Tyranno, and his frown turned into a slight grin. Her father dissapeared. Everyone laughed at Chazz.
"Well, your hot Kisa.." Chazz said grinning.
"Yeah, uhh..thanks for the compliment." Kisa kissed Syrus's cheek and smiled,"but I'm Syrus's hot dragon babe, right Sy?" Syrus had blushed, but simply nodded.
"Your really the Grim Reaper's daughter,Kisa?" Alexis asked.
She nodded," Yup, he takes many people's lives. Though he's got alot of dark magic on his side. I even have my own sythe. You know the pocket knife I carry?" They all nodded," That turns into my sythe. Though I might have to help my father with his job when I'm older. Which is kind of sad, since I want a family.. you know a yard full of kids, a husband who loves me, a big house, and a few animals. The normal family dream.. This might be weird since me and Syrus are just dating, but I think I've already found one of those things." Syrus blushed heavily at the thought of that. Having kids with Kisara, even being married to her? That dream seemed so far ahead.
"Uhh, Kisa? Your thinking so far ahead aren't you?" Syrus blushed and chuckled.
Kisa shrugged," Well, you never know it could happen." She smiled and began walking away," Hey guys! I bet I can beat you all back towards my dorm." With that the young dragoness began to run at normal human speed. Everyone else followed and laughed at their energetic friend.
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Post by Lord Blue Dragonal on Nov 10, 2007 12:43:29 GMT -5
Great chapter! I felt sorry for Chazz... not! Anyway, I thought the storyline was going really well and haven't miss the beat. Keep it up!
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Post by Broken Team on Nov 10, 2007 14:08:12 GMT -5
Brilliant..simply brilliant!
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Post by Inuzuka Delliah on Nov 10, 2007 17:07:22 GMT -5
Okay, I'm taking character requests for this story. So if you'd like a character to be in this story fill this out..
Name: Age: Rank:(Slifer Red, Ra Yellow, Obelisk Blue) Looks: Status: (Single, Not Looking,Taken by `whoever` Crushing on `whoever) Personality: Extra Info: Deck:
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Post by Broken Team on Nov 10, 2007 17:16:47 GMT -5
Name: Taylia (No last name) Age: 13 Rank:Obelisk Blue Looks: i194.photobucket.com/albums/z316/tayliauchiha/k-1.jpg (Click on the link) Status: Single, crushing on Jaden Personality:Taylia is a very short tempered quiet girl.She is always around when needed and is happy to lend a helping hand in any situation. Extra Info:Taylia has been orphaned all her life and is prone to hating people for no reason. She has a unique ability to readminds that she keeps hidden. She also has a large black dragon on her lower back and side, it's a birthmark and the only clue to who Taylia really is. Deck: Spellcaster,Fiend,Special effect
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Post by Lord Blue Dragonal on Nov 10, 2007 17:26:54 GMT -5
Name: Jak "Duelist Freak" Dawn (Duelist Freak is my Yu-gi-oh name) Age: 16 Rank: Obelisk Blue) Looks: Medium long brown hair, alway have a look that freak out other duelist. Status: Single Personality: Unknown, which is why people usually freak out by him. Extra Info: He joined academy and lauch to Blue in one duel because of his dangerous combination. His favorite cards, which is require for the combination, are (I forget, I have the deck that he uses, but my nephew lost it.) The care that have the effect, "If your opponent declare the attack, this card users choose the target." Atk is 2000 and def is 1500 (I think...) and it's lvl 5 plus Dark Snake Symdome. Deck: Fiend deck.
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